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Birds with broken wings

two birds 
from a distant land
wandering in the wilderness
with their distorted wings,
a pitiable pain and hapless heart
... life had become a meaningless art
damages were irrecoverable
she was a blood splattered queen
and his had a fallen dream.
two perfect souls
living in imperfection...
till they met each other
love flooded their heart with eternity.....

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  1. Date: 12/21/2011 8:10:00 AM
    Wow so much feeling in this wonderful rendering Red, harry

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 11:42:00 AM
    And so hope lives on. Never give up. God is faithful. I have that on a plaque. A biblical scripture. 1st Corrintheans or something. Have a wonderful christmas.

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 11:00:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poem. Very well done.

  1. Date: 12/11/2011 6:55:00 PM
    I hate reading your poetry now.....but that doesn't mean you aren't the best poet on any continent.

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 8:03:00 PM
    Your poem has a very happy for our avian friends. "Hail to thee blithe spirit. Bird thou never wert." - Percy Shelley Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 10:53:00 AM
    "love flooded their heart with eternity..",you write some great lines here,Fiery:) love your work.Hugs

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 8:47:00 PM
    beautiful write indeed. I loved the part... life had become a meaningless art. great poem you got here!

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 7:00:00 AM
    so many meanings,,,so beautiful a write,,,hope you are doing well,,,this is so enjoyable and a pleasure to read....

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 5:25:00 PM
    Beautiful, Smriti. You know how to write them. Now I am inspired. Maybe I will write one for you

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 11:34:00 AM
    A beautiful poem. Love the wording. Kim

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    Date: 12/6/2011 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanx Kim...much appreciated..