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Birdie Trouble

Birdie Trouble

So you think you’re going to hole me
Teed off well and on the green rolled me
Looked like hole in one
Then all hope was gone
When old albatross swooped and stole me 

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  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:22:00 AM
    Now I remember,you only had one limerick when I came looking for your limericks that one day. You should try more . And thanks for all your comments today.

    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal
    Date: 7/26/2013 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm not over keen on limericks, bit short for me. you're welcome at comments, my pleasure
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 12:09:00 PM
    I love your limerick. I'm hopeless at the buggers, so I enjoy reading a good one. Witty analogies in here, Richard. Licia :-)

    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal
    Date: 7/26/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is my one and only attempt, I'm no good at them really.
  1. Date: 5/2/2013 3:36:00 PM
    Interesting Limerick, Richard. I learned quite a bit tonight.

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:49:00 PM
    you are missing poems.... goodnight.... :-(....PD

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:15:00 PM
    Hi Richard, stopping by to say Good night.... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 1:41:00 PM
    A nice little swing or not LOL. Much Love, ~*~ SKAT

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 10:59:00 AM
    HA, RICHARD LOVING YOUR LIMERICK. made me smile, I'd seen my dad make a hole second swing. Birdie..... the first time I'd seen him golf. however many times, he could not get the ball in the hole, within the first 3 what look easy shots in the hole. so much for the 3 under par.... enjoyed...Linda

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 9:43:00 AM
    Good sense of humor in this limerick! Really clever.

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 11:46:00 PM
    OH, I like how you used birdie and albatross. Clever one!

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 7:16:00 AM
    I love a good limerick! Well done, Richard