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Big Heart

My massive heart Expanding my chest Large enough to accommodate God Yet enough room for the rest Love, kindness and compassion Are co-sharers Desires, lust and greed Are unwelcome indeed Prejudice, hatred and jealousy Sometimes gatecrash My security arrangements are frail I often cry and wail How to get rid of trash? That gathers against my wish How to clean the impurities And viruses quarantine How to make it shine I’ll be strong and tough If I win your love From you I need strength To clean its width and length And unwanted to flush

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/15/2012 1:06:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem quite a bit and I've come to like your style of writing as well as the themes about which you write. I will be coming back to read more ^_^
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Date: 1/12/2012 8:05:00 PM
As you say, we need that strength to help us overcome what seems so natural for humans beings. Thank you for sharing this struglle you have with us who have it too.
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Date: 5/22/2011 11:02:00 AM
So much in this poem for the reader to reflect on. Nice use of rhyme. Hope things are going well for you. Karen
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Date: 1/20/2010 3:17:00 PM
Mohammed, it's obvious from the responses you are getting here that you are a kind soul and this is all the repayment anybody needs, to have their poems read and then read others in turn. This is a poem full of truth and wisdom. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/9/2009 5:40:00 AM
Beautiful poem...very stirring, and I especially love the first stanza. ~Juliane
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Date: 12/1/2009 11:08:00 AM
I'm having a wonderful time here reading your beautiful poetry! thank you, love Simone
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Date: 11/30/2009 12:02:00 PM
Thought provoking piece conveyed in a creative way. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 11/19/2009 4:11:00 PM
hi Mohammad, I am sorry that you are feeling ill, and sometimes after an illness it takes a while to recuperate, just do as your doctor says and taske it easy so that you can recover, i was recently married and I am trying to publish my own book, take care my friend D-nyce
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Date: 11/18/2009 7:02:00 PM
hi Yamin, it's been a while since I have been on the site, I missed reading your great writes, this is another one my friend,such a soul stirring write, and I enjoyed it, I hope this finds you well, take care Dnyce
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Date: 11/12/2009 5:59:00 AM
Dear Mohammad, you are a unique writer that conveys such strong life messages with you perfectly choosen words. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/3/2009 10:27:00 AM
Mohammad, your words are wonderful. Everyone who desires to keep their hearts BIG AND PURE need help from Him who watches from above. This is a very touching and well written poem. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 10/17/2009 6:46:00 PM
Mohammad - Thank you for the blog comment - It means a lot to me and let me say I'm sorry for your loss - I guess that pain is what forms our hearts huh - yours is big as the sky bro - God Bless, mj
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Date: 10/17/2009 5:56:00 PM
Nice sentiments. Keep writing!
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Date: 10/17/2009 4:15:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts behind this thoughtful write. Keep writing. Sara
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