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Big Fat Lies

I always was a fool for you
Eating your lies with a silver spoon
Now I’m on a diet
But you still try it
Gagging me with a new ruse

Copyright © Black Eyed Susan

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  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:31:00 AM
    Obviously short but absolutely hit the spot, i know this moment from stored times in my life... to respond to your previous write as far as the criteria was laid down on google, your write fitted the middle english in here also, im a middle english fan....karen

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 5:10:00 PM
    great the way it rhymes & flows,,,, you have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 12:23:00 AM
    lol...this is great. Enjoyed this witty write!!

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 7:10:00 AM
    I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you B.E. Susan. Love and blessings, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:21:00 AM
    Where have I been when you've been writing all these gems? love it, Kathy

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 3:28:00 PM
    Great way to present the topic of one who is a is either a pathological liar or a complusive liar..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the honor of being in the winners' list in your contest...Sara

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 5:54:00 AM
    no more lie pie for you,lol,nice write Susan

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 7:32:00 AM
    Susan congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 7:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "#2 Another Crazy & Fun Limerick" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 10:35:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in PD's Contest, Susan! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 6:58:00 PM
    Congrats, Susan. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 12:43:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 12:32:00 PM
    congrats on your win Susan

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 9:12:00 PM
    oh, and I liked how you used metaphor in your limerick.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 9:10:00 PM
    Susan, did you repost this? I seem to remember seeing it before!

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:57:00 PM it.... i hate diets... they always fail and i give in... excellent one...pd

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 7:14:00 PM
    Good one! : )

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 4:55:00 PM
    Hahahaha...Sweet. :o)