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Beyond the Blues

Facing the horizon It is you that I watch without seeing you Its your lips that I taste without kissing you Its those arms that I feel without your embrace On the sand,my lonely footprints But somewhere in a distant land you walk beside me. inspired by the song Clown by Emeli Sander

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Allan Koven

Date: 7/15/2013 9:51:00 AM

Love the way you have with words.

Adarsh Raj

Date: 6/25/2013 11:24:00 PM

It was a pleasure reading this poem, loved it....:):):):)Adarsh

Michael Ainsley

Date: 6/25/2013 6:04:00 PM

We travel with missing friends and lovers always . I would go mad without such memories. Thanks Charmaine.

David Scott

Date: 6/13/2013 11:16:00 AM

I FEEL A SENSE OF LOSS HERE LOVLY WRITE THANK YIOU FOR YOUR COMENTS ON MINE XX DAVDSCOTT

Kirin Lawrence

Date: 6/12/2013 2:31:00 AM

i know them feels Charmaine.

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/6/2013 8:52:00 PM

The last couple of lines give a nice mystical feeling to this work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2013 6:29:00 PM

still love this one, Charma. it's so wonderful you are here at Soup.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/4/2013 12:12:00 PM

Whew!...'The Queen of Romance' strikes again...A real gem here my friend - Tim

Edward Orozco

Date: 6/4/2013 8:20:00 AM

Beautiful piece!! well written- edward

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/3/2013 9:41:00 AM

The title helped alot yes it's beyond the blues

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/30/2013 11:19:00 AM

Oh shucks, this is another melancholy yet beautiful write from you Charma-- maybe it is just me, but whenever I read your poems, it just takes me to this certain place-- I wish I could paint so I can express that place better-- a write that has your own unique stamp to it.

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 5/27/2013 2:47:00 PM

Another great poem! Pleased to see some new ones from you as well. This one I think is really admirable!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/27/2013 2:06:00 PM

love knows no distance... such a tender write that tugs at the heartstrings... just beautiully penned!... well done!..:) huggs

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/27/2013 9:12:00 AM

Memories made with each new footprint placed in the heart. Gorgeous, passionate, & necessary. A tremendous job.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/26/2013 3:53:00 PM

Char, your universe of love resonates around the globe, beautiful write! Thanks for stopping by with sweet encouragement...your legacy...jimbo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2013 12:05:00 AM

beyond blue and beautiful!!!