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Betwixt your Twain


The two logics of twain can drive one insane if one doesn’t learn refrain from the one marked as Cain learning refrain, voids the pain Love marked concept as Cain also Able precept was very plain that a soul might learn refrain that two brothers avoid the pain Love is life and voids afford pain The reality is of the twain balance betwixt your twain with love now and again learn in life to avoid pain no man can serve logics twain… Selah

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  1. Date: 3/8/2012 4:40:00 PM
    enjoyed the splendid way you used the comparison technique, moe... a soulful , beautiful write!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 4:08:00 PM
    mono rhyme, awesome poem, love the message also. harry

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 7:46:00 PM
    excellent write .. Moses.. and deeply dramatic impact of this Bible precept of murder .. good luck if for contest.. excellent ..luv..

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 2:39:00 PM
    That is correct one can't serve two masters for sure..For he will love the one and hate the other..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 1:27:00 PM
    John, I really like the way you used the Bible story of Able and Cain to describe the difference between concept and precept thinking. How true your last line is: we can't libe by both concept and precept. We have to choose, but it takes someone as enlightened as you to explain it this well. Excellent poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 12:55:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poem John, love,vie