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Between Midnight and Dawn

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Between Midnight and Dawn

Overcome by the peace in the midnight hour
Moonlight fills the otherwise velvet black sky
Twinkles of newness invade our senses from afar
The night so beautiful it causes us both to sigh

On our tropical island watching the trees sway
Love was captured between midnight and dawn
Bodies entwined the feeling took our breath away
Forever our nights under the moonlight will live on

For: *Gail Doyle's first contest*
"A Tropical Theme Under A Moonlight"
Written By: Carol Brown
1st Place Winner

Copyright © Carol Sunshine Brown

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  1. Date: 7/26/2014 6:55:00 AM
    This poem excels at creating a romantic mood. I think it's delightful. Exemplary composition, Carol.

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 10:34:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:12:00 AM
    Excellent use of half rhyme! Very sophisticated. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:10:00 PM
    Dear Carol, Another beauty,your lines sparkle everytime!Best wishes,Tracy

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 5:45:00 AM
    wow sounds too good to be true

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 1:18:00 PM
    Hey Carol, This poem is a great example of how with just a few lines, a beautiful scene can be created! This was lovely ...Samia

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 4:14:00 AM
    a VERY FABULOUS POEM I should say Tashi Gyeltshen

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 11:35:00 AM
    I love the word combination afar and hour thank you for coments on mine Ive been so bissy Ive had no time to look at your poems are you on face book love to chat more about poetry maybe you could give me a few pointers x david scott

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 1:29:00 PM
    Hi Carol great to be back and read some of your wonderful words, cheered up a verey wet and dull day in GB thanks

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 12:13:00 PM
    That fits the topic well. I was drawn into the expeience.

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 7:27:00 AM
    A lovely poem!

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 3:27:00 PM
    this is nice :)

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 6:10:00 PM
    Oh,,, I love this,,, I can see/ read ;} why you won first place ;}stay blessed dear lady !

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 6:13:00 AM
    So beautiful poem. Goodluck Carol!!! ^_^

  1. Date: 3/26/2012 7:28:00 AM
    Love this work, I have a poem similar about the night sky. It's called "Starry Gaze" that you read... This piece reminded me of that one... lol, You have a good day Carol, God Bless!

  1. Date: 3/25/2012 9:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win! somehow I missed this beauty! a lovely description :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 4:07:00 PM
    ah peace and sublime, and the red red wine, 2 lovers enthralled with their pact, great verse here babe...

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 6:21:00 AM
    Oh this is wonderful. Great writing. I loved the verses. Congrats on winning for this poem. You are truly bless to be able to write such wonderful things.

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 2:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win of this lovely poem, Carol! Sounds like an enchanting trip to this paradise.:) Best wishes to you and yours, love, Mikki that your bunny? It's looks so cute and sweet.

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 7:25:00 AM
    Love this poem, it is similar to Winds of Passion in nature... lol