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Betor's Jack

Whinny Winey on the track
The coluber bravoing at his back
The betor keen on his kale
Here goes the whistle
Spectators applauded Round the clock 
Whinny Winey to the finish line potted the betor's jack.

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  1. Date: 9/12/2011 7:16:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 7:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!--------Lori

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 2:28:00 PM
    Swairik, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Betor's Jack" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 8:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Swairik. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 4:25:00 AM
    hey Swairik congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 12:53:00 AM
    A 6th place congratulations my friend for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 12:52:00 AM
    congrats Swairik on top ten win with this great Alliteration poetry luv..