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Bestowed Moment

BESTOWED MOMENT In the quiet Are you listening? In an awful, lonely hush There is this mantra An almost imperceptible hummmmmmmmm Easing one out of focus But not out of self I sense it in the shoulders – this roundness (this sur-roundness) I sense this presence Eternal Beyond the planets, stars, galaxies One may rationalize, call it, simply, flow of blood - The familiar coursing life force Yes, that too But no! There is this unutterable sense of beyond A bestowed moment

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Date: 1/16/2013 6:59:00 AM
OH THE INTRIGUE. VERY VIBRANT WRITE
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Date: 1/15/2013 11:05:00 AM
This makes me think I should get back into meditation, Daver! I had always loved those "bestowed moment"s.:) An amazing write, you've surely given the reader an insight into this "beyond'! Keep well, Love, Mikki
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Date: 1/13/2013 9:15:00 AM
Facinating write...
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Date: 1/10/2013 6:48:00 PM
wow, deep and kind of soothing!!! Good to have one of these kinds of moments, my friend, after what you told me about the decline of your senses! You hang in there because you are a grand old tom!!
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Date: 1/10/2013 12:29:00 PM
Great write!
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Date: 1/9/2013 3:33:00 PM
Yes, Daver. It's an"..unutterable sense of beyond..." So subtle that one can easily miss it, with all the destractions. Thanks for sharing your "Bestowed Moment". Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/9/2013 11:33:00 AM
A quiet bestowed moment, how awesome that is. Good job with this writing. Thanks for sharing.
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