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Best Breakfast

My mystic mirror Shades silver stones simultaneously Later, light leaked Unconsciousness uttered Sleep splashed sincerity Amidst an aesthetic smile, stood shining stars I immediately identified who was welcoming morning marvelously; My mother... Sleep slept, smiles spread Today's treasure, Best Breakfast... Thank You For A Wonderful Morning, Mother...

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Chitra Lakhera

Date: 10/18/2008 1:25:00 AM

This is a fantastic use of the form. The lines go on so well with the subject, there's no reinforcing in between. And this is great poem! Mothers are like that...right? You must have enjoyed the breakfast:) Love, Chitra

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/17/2008 10:30:00 AM

Wow...this was truly beautiful, Sara. What a treaure of a poem for your mother! ~ Carrie

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 10/17/2008 9:38:00 AM

Altogether amazing alliteration Sara. I loved it and, this time, it is you who has put a smile on my face. Your friend, Nigel