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Recanting those memories that we have had, Is all I wanted to do; But, I could feel that they had entirely subsided Deep into my heart, And I feel it will hold the whole life through. Amidst the turmoils in life, I still have those memories; As if they really had aggregated within, Yet, I wish time helps me to extricate, Like a shooting star, hoping to vanish somewhere. No more pains, no more tears Are all I could wish; Because, I really love you that much, Although it hurts me, I need to let go and set you free. Day by day, I storm heaven with prayer, That we'll both find the real happiness; Happiness that is separately in our own, And only heaven knows, When our hearts meet again, never or soon. You must need to know even just through a dream, That I really need your help; Please, come just like a soft and gentle blow of wind, And do whisper into my ears, That I need to be happy; since, God knows what both of us is best. Come and tell me that you also fervently pray, That someday, somehow this emotional rancor of mine; Yet, benevolent will soon be compensated, By someone who will really love me, Love me even more than what you did.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/25/2013 10:59:00 AM
I too feel your words Leonora...congratulations on your featured poem....
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Date: 8/25/2013 7:58:00 AM
Good Morning My lovely sweet sis ... Hope you day went well. Leo :-):-);-) --CONGRATULATIONS!!! on having your poem Featured on the soups home page. enjoy your coming week. Always & Forever * Linda
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Date: 8/24/2013 6:32:00 PM
Leonora, congratulations, on your featured poem of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~ :-)
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Date: 10/17/2012 7:11:00 PM
Leonora, you seem to be a good shoulder if some needs to share pain ... i hope all will repay, and love you the way you should be loved... enjoyed this one,, thank you for sharing more poetry abut you... xox~pd
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Date: 8/25/2012 11:08:00 PM
I can feel it...I can relate to your nice poem friend Nore :) thanks for sharing
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Date: 4/15/2012 6:05:00 PM
I can relate, and we will have someone love us again! Try to stay strong and keep the faith!
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Date: 3/29/2012 8:05:00 PM
amen to that pray, Leonora. I enjoy reading your poems today, thank your for stopping by and your kind comments
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Date: 3/29/2012 5:49:00 PM
thanks, norie, for your wishes..and enjoyed this poem..is it about yor life .. hope not..jag
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Date: 3/29/2012 10:50:00 AM
Like your poem Leonora. Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/29/2012 10:55:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise. Take care always. Love, Leonora (Norie).
Date: 3/29/2012 8:10:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your love lost poem..Yes, sometimes one is wasting their on someone who has no idea what love is really about..I hope just a write and not your life..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/29/2012 10:42:00 AM
Thank you very much. Enjoy the day! Love, Leonora.
Date: 3/28/2012 12:07:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Leonora. I am reading today and hoping to find some inspiration to write. I had a run a week or so ago and now it wimped out on me. Thank you for posting your poetry and sharing it with others. Love, Carol
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/29/2012 1:35:00 AM
Thank you very much friend, Carol. It's really good to write a poem if you're really inspired. Take care always. Love, Leonora (Norie).

Book: Shattered Sighs