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Below We Drifted

Holding hands, into our eyes we stare As we turn to the bleak that awaits us there Deafening creaks like thunderous roars Her arching back in ripping soar Screaming explosions as the waters seep Tears of many as life ends their keep Below the cobalt in a coldly drift Sinking debris in continual shift Our hands still held amidst disappearing lights We no longer focus as we enter our blight Below we drifted, two souls soon to be gone How many of us end up where we don't belong *~*

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  1. Date: 4/23/2012 8:31:00 PM
    Oh I like this James,,,, have a great day

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 1:43:00 PM
    Captivating. Loved it. Continue writing forever. All the best.

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 12:34:00 PM
    thankxx James.. hope u cxonsider entering my contest and "bite" another poet with your entry luv.. will understand if u don't want to but hope u will be part of the fun.. too..

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 12:30:00 PM
    I am very interested to read this today James,, its so full of intent, and acceptence, of possibilty and more..!

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 7:41:00 PM
    Much-o action packed in the back section of this lovely interjection!

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  1. Date: 3/28/2012 1:04:00 PM
    This has a Titanic feel to it James, your poem is just so much better than the movie.. Brilliant imagery ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 12:12:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon James. I am reading today and hoping to find some inspiration to write. I had a run a week or so ago and now it wimped out on me. Thank you for posting your poetry and sharing it with others. Love, Carol