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Below a Douglas Fir


Below a Douglas Fir tree one beautiful moonlit night
I sat there with my Missy as we viewed a lovely sight

The aurora borealis was lighting up the sky
Then something to my right suddenly caught my eye

A gem from outer space tore across the cobalt blue
Leaving behind a trail a quite spectacular view

Two in trapped capture witnessing a shooting star
We wonder where it came from, out there from afar

We sat there for ages chatting about the sight we seen
Phenomena such as this are generally seen in dreams

Below the Douglas Fir tree that beautiful moonlit night
We marvelled at it's arrival as it disappears from sight







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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2010 9:23:00 PM

VEry pretty, James.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/25/2010 2:18:00 PM

Perhaps it was a falling star, James. They're supposed to be signs of luck for lovers who see them together. Captivating poem. Love, Carolyn

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/23/2010 12:09:00 PM

A lovely write James. The title of this one caught my eye. Image rich, romantic and quite magical ~ Sharon x

Jayne Eggins

Date: 8/23/2010 2:39:00 AM

Sigh when you write like this James its superlative ... loved this beautiful delicate write ... sigh ive missed reading you love Jayne x x x

Linda Rutherford

Date: 8/22/2010 4:12:00 PM

When you have lived in a city as long as I did, it's not often that you see stars..not to metion falling stars...wasen't until I move to a small town in Texas did I see the wonder of a star filled night..and a shooting star..was like I was there with you..a beautiful poem..visual...Linda

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/22/2010 12:30:00 PM

Another beautiful gem James.. Awesome way to end my evening.. :) Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2010 11:57:00 AM

Not too many times do we see these split second happenings...August was suppose to be the month in the northern sky from ten P.M. until around 2 A.M. to see a show of shooting stars from a comet or maybe it was called meteorites ...I do know for sure what it was called but it was from a comet...I went out several times and looked North but not such luck as to happen to see it..Enjoyed reading about your experience or of a picture that you have seen..Sara