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Being Real

Amid a sea of faces I am a pencil sketch.. The outline correct But my features blurry. Hard to know where I stop and my shadow begins...trying hard to decide which one is real. Days are automatic, one and then another, not feeling strong emotion, easy enough, muted pain... The world can seem distant perhaps I'm someone else's story written yesterday on the ever shifting sand......

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  1. Date: 8/16/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Well written and a delight to read.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 11:21:00 AM
    Oh wow..what an excellent piece written here..I love it..sometimes we have to examine ourselves..perception is reality..I really love how creative you were with this write,