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Beginning of the End

when i face th eworld with all of my strengths and all of my weaknesses i realize in horror that if its only just me left standing for the crowd that it must truly be the beginning of the end for all of the world.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/28/2009 1:45:00 PM

Dani, I read it twice. Then, the lightbulb in my brain flashed!!! You have said well, that if only one person stands up for the belief(s) of the masses, and the masses do not speak up for themselves, THEN, the few in control will dictate the future of the world. Thus, when only one stands up and speaks out, freedoms of the world's citizens, begin to end. Did I get it? Smiling, DAS-J ps I went to highschool in South Florida (1963-1967) with a young man named George Sousa...any relation???

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/18/2009 9:35:00 AM

A thought provoking write, we all have strengths and weaknessess that we must face and deal with daily will be judged for them hard to say? Well done!