Before We Part

Love me Love me for the last time Hold my palm close to your heart Feel me whisper to your soul to that soft sweet tender part Hold me Hold me for a while just a little while Hold my face between your hands Love knows much deeper than friends And through unspoken words Let my lips rest on your chest Let me shelter in your arms till silence kill dark emptiness
Charma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 1/22/2015 11:38:00 PM
It is so hard to let go of the one you love, the one you know who was meant for you...if to have just one more chance to hold her...I would never let her go..so beautiful is this...I feel your heart sb...to my favourites ....hugs Coach nd
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Date: 4/10/2012 4:34:00 PM
Ahhhhh, sigh. THis is wonderful too. Thanks for wanting to bite me. heehee. That's so cool you eat sunflower seeds too. the Europeans I am talking to don't seem to even know what I am talking about, thinking that seeds are only for birds!! Do they have flavored ones where you are?
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Date: 4/8/2012 10:41:00 PM
I had to stop by and read more of your work..really enjoy your ART!!! Love Pace
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Date: 4/7/2012 8:43:00 PM
Lovely as always Char ....jimbo
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Date: 4/6/2012 10:13:00 PM
Beautiful piece. Love this.
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Date: 4/6/2012 8:40:00 AM
enticingly romantic with breathless ardor in lines of romantic emotion Charma dear friend so sweet.. u express your heart on pages which come to life.. we are all doing well.. therapy is awful but necessary.. puppies are all so fun.. weather is magnifico.. will be home in May for my birthday .. yeah.. luv..
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/10/2012 6:29:00 AM
Im happy you're going to be home by then May baby :)yessssssssss
Date: 4/5/2012 2:18:00 PM
Sweet friend, I always love the passion in your poetry. Very sad ending (and beginning) knowing you would be holding each other for the last time. Gave me some tears, dear. Hope you are well and doing fine. Let me know when the baby is due! Love, Carolyn
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/10/2012 6:30:00 AM
I am fine sweet Carolyn.. Don't worry sweety ,its just poetry..Im doing great apart from some nausea.Baby is due on 3rd or 4th September :).. Can't wait :)Hugs
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