Beer Mugs

There was a young girl named, Anheuser. Wouldn't heed, when folks would advise her! Her and Pabst, took a chance, had a whirlwind romance, and now they're both, sadder, Budweiser!

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Gail Debole

Date: 6/10/2012 4:41:00 PM

Ralph - Excellent! Congrats on your win!

Mark Goodson

Date: 6/10/2012 1:51:00 PM

A cute play on words! I have enjoyed your poem.

Kash Poet

Date: 6/10/2012 7:13:00 AM

Congrats on your win Ralph!Enjoyed the read!

Susan Palli

Date: 6/10/2012 1:55:00 AM

Cute one

Tanya Harrington

Date: 6/9/2012 12:23:00 PM

Love the play on words! Congrats on your win...Tanya

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/9/2012 12:20:00 PM

My idea of a good limerick. Throwing the despised pun in there at the proper moment. Great one Ralph. Love, Joyce

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/9/2012 9:36:00 AM

Very cute. Congratulations.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/9/2012 9:36:00 AM

Soooo Clever!!!! I love this one Ralph!! I would put this as a #1 !!! Congratulations on this great limerick!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2012 7:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Limerick" contest Ralph. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 6/9/2012 6:56:00 AM

Ralph congrats on your win..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/9/2012 5:21:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine limerick xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/9/2012 5:11:00 AM

this is hilarious and so deserving of a win! congratulations!

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/9/2012 4:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Funny... Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2012 12:25:00 AM

Maybe I should have put this second, it's so good, Ralph. I just love the play on words that you did with sadder, but wiser. So cute. Congrats on being in the top three.