Becoming Yourself

Who are you really, when no one is watching?
What makes you think and act like you do?
When will you stop pretending and drop your disguises?
Where will you find your identity true?
Why not embrace the uniqueness of you?


8/26/12
For Harry Horseman's 5 W's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/1/2012 10:42:00 AM
kim, congrats;-) In Harry's fun fun... 5 w's contest. I think this was a fun contest.. Take care.. always~PD
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Date: 8/30/2012 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Harry's "5W's" contest Kim. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2012 4:51:00 PM
Excellent questions, Kim! I think parents always ask questions like these when their kids follow their peers and not their own hearts. A belated congrats on a wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/28/2012 6:40:00 PM
Hi Kim - Kudos to you regarding your win for this poem of wisdom!
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Date: 8/28/2012 5:53:00 PM
Excellent write Kim.....if people would just be themselves, they would be happier. Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 8/28/2012 5:27:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, always good to embrace one's uniqueness :-)
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Date: 8/28/2012 2:23:00 PM
Just read a book called: "Watch yourself in the mirror and tell me who you are" Good written for the contest Kim - I wish you good luck - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/28/2012 1:04:00 PM
Very nice,Kim...It made me stop,and think for a moment... :o)
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Date: 8/28/2012 11:40:00 AM
clever thought provoking write, Kim. Thanks - enjoyed the contest : )
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Date: 8/28/2012 10:06:00 AM
excellent thoughts prevail in this piece Kim.. thought provoking one. many thankxxx for my big win in Shadorma Style.. am so honored and blessed too,,I had those words I wrote in mind waiting to be on paper so appreciate the recognition with so many great poets luv..
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Date: 8/28/2012 7:20:00 AM
Great thoughts penned..Enjoyed reading this morning..God gives each person something unique _a gift that sets them apart to be able to do what God has for them to do in life..Thanks for stopping by..I am honored to have placed in your contest.Thanks for reading and considering my work..Sara
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Date: 8/27/2012 6:39:00 PM
My uniqueness seems to get me in tons of trouble :( Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/27/2012 6:01:00 PM
big congrats to you, Kim! You deserve it.
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Date: 8/27/2012 3:06:00 PM
Kim I really like this poem, so true. A good question, what makes you think and act the like you do... need to answer this and assess. Thanks for the great poem. Keep up the great work. Lee
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Date: 8/27/2012 2:37:00 PM
wonderful! love it!
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Date: 8/27/2012 9:12:00 AM
I love this wise poem of self-examination......worthy questions each one! A terrific poem in so few words, Kim! Big congratulations to you!
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Date: 8/27/2012 8:11:00 AM
Wow!!! I really love this one,Kim! Congratulations on your win my dear! hugs, leonora
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Date: 8/27/2012 7:27:00 AM
congrats on your win Kim
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Date: 8/27/2012 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win Kim xx
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Date: 8/27/2012 5:18:00 AM
congrats Kim, love this, and thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 8/26/2012 11:48:00 PM
The US Dept. of Health and Human Services produced television commercials promoting the "be yourself" idea back in the seventies. It's good advice to anyone.
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:46:00 PM
Excellent way to do the contest, Kim!
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