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Beauty Now Live This Hour

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Beauty Now Live This Hour

Black beauty
Love after dark
Ravens hair and braids
My constant stare it stays
My pen and words 
They crave
Discription of this maid
Sexy just isn't enough
To describe clothing
And extra stuff
A walking model
Before my eyes
Dressed to match her
Beautiful pride
No facial expression
Could steal her beauty
When she walks around
Her art is on duty
And even now
While we share this room
I steal glances
But I'll be gone soon
She might guess
That it's of her I write
I'm sure that she knows
That she's a wonderful sight
It's very rare
For this kind of girl
To be around
It's very surprising
She's in this part of town
She caught my eye
For the last five days
And she has a sexy
In all of her ways

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  1. Date: 10/31/2013 6:10:00 PM
    A compliment to the lady..If you got to know her, you might find that she is not for you..Sara

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 11/16/2013 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    not if i was hugh heffner.
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:45:00 AM
    Obviously mesmerizing beauty...written beautifully..John......

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 10/26/2013 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    mesmerized is only part of it. it's comming to grips that i'm 50 and she's probably 23. i wish i was hugh heffner rich about now.
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 6:51:00 AM
    - Your eyes have captured something beautiful, a lovely poem John ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)