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Beautifully Simple

Exquisite beings are we that inhabit this terrestrial sphere. Entered in Nathan Dilts "A Simple Reminder" Contest

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Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/22/2010 9:09:00 PM

Hi kimberly.I agree we are all beautiful within.Unfortunately it's that thing called ego and all it's baggage that tends to get in our way.So sometimes instead of showing what is our reality-'The exquisite beings' we only produce the shadow.I love this.So few words yet they speak volumes and a deep truth.A worthy entry for any contest.Beautiful poetry, so inspiring an example of your beautiful self.Thank you.And my thanks also for reading and appreciating my own work.Love June(Sylvia)

Date: 11/6/2010 5:38:00 PM

Thought provoking piece. Much captured in just one line. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen

James Fraser

Date: 10/17/2010 4:36:00 AM

Exquisite we are with a tinge of madness, excellent Monoku Kimberly >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2010 12:00:00 AM

AWesome thoughts in this, Kimberly!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/15/2010 6:05:00 PM

great thought...I like monoku!

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 7/12/2010 5:39:00 PM

Wow! really like this a lot. Thanks for sharing and giving reason to ponder the thought. Have a great day! Scarlett

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2010 3:59:00 AM

Good luck in the contest if it hasn't already been...I haven't been keeping up with them..Great thought that you have penned for we are awesome spiritual beings of magnificent worth ...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Date: 6/23/2010 1:50:00 PM

What an interesting perspective for the reader to ponder about. Uplifting view. I hope to see more poetry from you soon. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good day. Karen

Rachel W

Date: 6/17/2010 5:12:00 AM

I'm facinated that you can write such beautiful work, that sums up an entire existance in such few words.

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 5/26/2010 8:14:00 AM

I so envy you guys that can write such powerful visuals and messages in such few words. GREAT job! Have a great day! Love Scarlett

Brian Strand

Date: 5/25/2010 12:32:00 AM

You tell it as it is Kimberly.Rgds Brian

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/20/2010 1:36:00 AM

Yes, there are many exquisite beings. Diversity of life is God's gift to man. I love your reminder, Kimberly in your well said monoku. Lovingly, Dane

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2010 7:56:00 PM

VEry cool way to do the contest! lUv, andrea

Brian Strand

Date: 5/19/2010 1:07:00 AM

Your title says it all Kimberely.Rgds Brian & thank you for your kind words.

Sheol Moribund

Date: 5/17/2010 11:56:00 AM

Dear Kimberly: I really like this poem (I am a big fan of science fact and fiction). Great job. Yours truly: Sheol

Rachel W

Date: 5/16/2010 7:50:00 PM

Many people need this simple reminder. Good luck in the competition!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/16/2010 4:36:00 PM

We must sometimes be "reminded " of this dignity that has been given to us ...so that we may more often try to act the part. Great monoku. Kimberly!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/15/2010 8:25:00 PM

Certainly powerful a statement Kimberly and good luck in Nathan's contest.. much said in one line.. thankxxx for your special comments today.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/15/2010 7:40:00 PM

great htoughts!

Date: 5/15/2010 12:43:00 PM

Interesting though for the reader to ponder about. Best wishes in the contest. Karen

James Peranteau

Date: 5/15/2010 6:52:00 AM

I think truly we ar relevent to be bless with the inhabiting of this sphere ! Awesome thought ! james

Daver Austin

Date: 5/15/2010 6:40:00 AM

Food for thought. Relevant, yes, but the world could do without us very well? I wonder? I like this poem mucho. Love, daver