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Beautiful Nature

the feel of the air the look of the sky stop and stare my oh my what a beautiful sight

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Matthew Anish

Date: 4/27/2010 2:11:00 PM

I like your poem. However I feel you should have left out the my oh my. It would give it more of a haiku type feel. Yeah, the look of the sky can be truly inspiring.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/25/2010 4:12:00 AM

Finally spring,Autumn! Nice write...Keep your pen flowing!...Gert

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/12/2010 4:57:00 PM

yes it is...spring is great! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2010 4:06:00 PM

A refreshing look at the impact spring has on our spirits, Autumn. Nice poem! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2010 11:47:00 AM

Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Autumn. Love, Carol