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Beautiful Beginning To a Bad Ending

Beautiful beginning to a bad ending lying all alone and restless unable find any slumber, cant escape your image, sleepless, cant focus on anything but your surrender, tugging a vision with the rhythm that's in my head the sound of you lying was when all hope was soon dead so delighted with a new understanding of how you could lie with the truth hidden from me somewhere inside hostility and anger you through from the sky and in disbelief i could only wonder why while you stand there sighing with a look in your eye waiting and watching with an innocent face all you wanted was this to be our last goodbye, lying alone and restless in despair a lights shines down on me and cleans the air she appears in front of me and looks at me with a gentle stare gives me a hug and tells me that life's not fair says don't worry grabs my hand and tells me that she will always be there that nothing is beyond her repair lonely eyes looked back at her as i spoke the words thank you, your the only one who cares...

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Date: 4/12/2013 8:12:00 AM
WOW-- really romantic and emotive poem. Enjoyed this great write & welcome to P/Soup.
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Date: 4/11/2013 12:26:00 PM
I was attracted to your name to read your poem and glad that I did. It is exceptionally well written and a true depiction of relationships and the reality of them. I like the format and style too.
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