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'be a Rainbow'

Dreary days are forecast when rain are pelting down grey skies as far as you can see just like that, a a rainbow appears, without warning your spirit feels lifted guess there is something to smile about life has its moments where little seem to make sense and all you are capable of are tears just like a rainbow “a hello”, or “a how are you doing?” can be life altering In our busy lives; we rarely say “I’ve been thinking about you” who knows maybe someone is in need of a rainbow While navigating through the private storms in their lives...
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2013 5:04:00 PM
Pleased to read this heartening piece; Wilma I wish you many happy rainbow times ypurs Joe..)
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Date: 8/26/2012 3:50:00 AM
You never fail to be a rainbow in my life, Missy. I honestly mean this, and I thank you from my heart for being a brilliant one... mwahugs and thank you!
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Date: 8/12/2012 3:43:00 PM
You have a great mind.
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:37:00 AM
Beautiful piece my dear CTH... Nothing short of amazing... profound and re-readable (if thats a word) lol... so enjoyed dipping into your soul and reading this poem.... Hugs from a NonFlirt lol... Michael
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Date: 8/2/2012 12:33:00 PM
dear me, wilms.. what joy this piece brings.. so smoothly and warmly arranged with poetic ease!... lovely piece!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/2/2012 9:01:00 AM
Wilma honey, I needed lifting again so I came back for a re-read...David
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Date: 8/2/2012 8:51:00 AM
lovely thoughts and a superb premise Wilma luv.. your words give a new glow to the spirit inside.. best wishes if for a contest.. we are having a heat wave.. 103 today and so humid.. we could use a bit of Winter to give us some breath luv.. stay warm.. sending u so,e heat from the beach..
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Date: 8/2/2012 5:34:00 AM
very nice write Wilma....enjoyed...love..Joseph
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Date: 8/1/2012 8:35:00 PM
Beautifully written free verse here Wilmaa..I find this one a touching write.
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Date: 8/1/2012 3:37:00 PM
Wow, this is a very moving piece Wilma! I really loved the rainbow feel you presented in your poem! That is such a pleasing moment when a rainbow is shown to you, to be given a rainbow is truly a wonderful gift! I enjoyed this creative write! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/1/2012 2:52:00 PM
very inspirational! this is certainly a rainbow for whoever is reading it!
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Date: 8/1/2012 2:02:00 PM
This is warm and bright piece...feels like a colourful rainbow, Wilma! Strange opening up this one, I'd just gotten an email where someone said they had driven through one.:) Two rainbows in less than hour, I'm feeling blessed. Keep well...wishing you great joy and happiness!! Mikki
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Date: 8/1/2012 12:13:00 PM
Wilma you have lifted me with your lovely lines....David
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Date: 8/1/2012 11:55:00 AM
You have described a gray day that turns into a colorful happy day Wilma. - Yes, we all need a happy day, thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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