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Ballad of Dreams: One: Beneath the Realm part two

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Ballad of Dreams: One: Beneath the Realm part two

Why oh demon have you blocked me from such this place?
Tell me, tell me, I wish to look upon your flawless face
I wish to find that mysterious cloaked figure, walking amongst the dead
his image, his visage appears to me- clouding my head

Take me back to my dreamland, the forests, the fog and the river
Against your touch I no longer shiver
But I implore you, my demon protector take me back to my reality
Do not leave me to continue to face this false fantasy

Bring me back to my dead forest
Where by the brooke I can rest
And I, forever with you, will be free at last
For this reality, will always remain and my love for you grows vast

Above the realm of fantasy
To the blurred lines of the beating heart of Reality
Lies this secret world of the unknown
And a bird, is perched upon the grey castle stone

Contemplatively I watch this bird, such beauty in such a deadened place
His red-black wings, spread as he flys dropping low-almost smacking me in my face
Longingly I yearn to be just as he is, flying content and free
But alas, I am stuck to this broken ground, waiting for you to return to me

My faith in you, is slowly dieing,
heart cracking and crying
I know not why I feel this bond to you
Everything all just

And I wait, and I continue to wait when suddenly there you are
You seem so close-like I can feel you-though you are distant and far
But it doesn't matter because you've returned me and now I am complete in my home
Down here below lost in the unkown

Where no one can find me 
And you and I are free
To spead out times wandering aimlessly through the forest dead
Where the inhabitants of this land do not tread

And my mysterious dark figured friend
Watches over me, always been the protector in the end
But to you my heart belongs
And only to you will it ever belong

Beneathe the lines of reality
Lies a secret- a world of fantasty
I find this place often in my dreams-with the castle on the hil, it's faded stone
Down here in the dream of false reality, lieing fantasy-is all to be known

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  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:15:00 AM
    That bird fascinated me, which means you can get under the readers skin with the tale. A true ballad. And the repeat of the conclusion from the intro---brilliantly chilling. Overall, one of my favorites, hands down. ^^(holy crap i wrote a novel) Always, laura (part 2)

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:14:00 AM
    "Against your touch I know longer shiver" But the reader surely does! And this is astounding. Who would have thought a demon to be a protector? Great originality. Damn, I'm kinda jealous of this poem. Hehe. I love the lapse of time, as well as the contemplative bird stanza. (part 1)

    Larkin Avatar Rebecca Larkin
    Date: 11/6/2012 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    aw thanks so much :D *blush* also: *no (I no longer) hehe but anyway thank you for these awesome comments. I didn't think I could get you jealous of my stuff haha thanks. you are great haha.
    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 11/6/2012 12:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    no* D:
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 6:18:00 AM
    Again excellent... and nice imagery... Terry

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 6:12:00 AM
    Bravo Rebecca I enjoyed both parts and hope to read more from you. Love, Carol