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Bag of Sins

This bag of sins you left are not mine When you died they were at my door I put them around my neck Red shoulders, heavy heart Your pain became mine Time to let go Lose your sins Gain my Life. ©Holly P. Moore January 2013

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Date: 2/4/2013 4:43:00 AM
powerful and profound,, also inspiring and very positive,, this is wonderful poetry Holly...
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Date: 2/3/2013 2:01:00 PM
Holly; this is a very good poem. A bag of sins. I hate sins. I once had 2 bags full, but I got rid of them - they were getting too heavy. Thanks for sharing. Once you ask when my husband had passed. He passed in 11/25/2009. Have a nice day. Lucilla
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Date: 2/2/2013 11:11:00 PM
Touching and powerful , great write
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Date: 2/2/2013 1:00:00 PM
wow, this is GOOD. I am happy to see your newest posts today.
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Date: 2/1/2013 1:26:00 AM
Holly yep, yep, yep, most definitely the first bright step...David
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Date: 1/31/2013 9:40:00 PM
WOW, this is very powerful writing. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
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