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Bag of Sins

This bag of sins you left are not mine
When you died they were at my door
I put them around my neck
Red shoulders, heavy heart
Your pain became mine
Time to let go
Lose your sins
Gain my

©Holly P. Moore
   January 2013

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  1. Date: 2/4/2013 4:43:00 AM
    powerful and profound,, also inspiring and very positive,, this is wonderful poetry Holly...

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 2:01:00 PM
    Holly; this is a very good poem. A bag of sins. I hate sins. I once had 2 bags full, but I got rid of them - they were getting too heavy. Thanks for sharing. Once you ask when my husband had passed. He passed in 11/25/2009. Have a nice day. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 11:11:00 PM
    Touching and powerful , great write

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 1:00:00 PM
    wow, this is GOOD. I am happy to see your newest posts today.

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:37:00 AM
    yes, we all have enough issues dealing with our own guilt, do not accept what others try to put on you. Excellent Nonet. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:26:00 AM
    Holly yep, yep, yep, most definitely the first bright step...David

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:40:00 PM
    WOW, this is very powerful writing. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.