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Bad Weather and Broken Washing Machines

Your a good friend And that was a good write I'm going through a rough time Must be the time of night Pour me a drink too I think we could both use a swig Captain, Jack, Soco? Your pick We need a nice buzz A little numbing for enjoyment To forget about our problems And for the moment, just enjoy life This misery is apocalyptic Its ridiculous as well I hope things get better Man a turn of tide would be swell Its like we have stains on our shirts And detergent isn't working Bleach might not stain them But all the sudden, the washer isn't working

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/3/2013 7:27:00 PM
Like the way it flowed,,, does the washer flow now;} you have a great day anyway
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Date: 1/29/2013 1:50:00 PM
I'll drink, laugh or argue with you anytime Jay - your the best - You have a good remedy for misery, and a resilient out look too - I respect the way you ascribe two qualities to misery - I can always rely on you to 'keep art real' - J.A.B. %
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Date: 1/22/2013 2:15:00 AM
One unfortunate day, hope it goes well. - A good poem Jay, sorry but I had to smile a little too. - I wish you a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
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Jay Loveless
Date: 1/22/2013 2:20:00 AM
Haha dont feel bad, its a funny write about a horrible day. We have to laugh, thats what makes it better.

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