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Bad day this helps

I'm awkward but i know it
alot more than i care to admit
but i try to be normal and liked
can't think of any better words than abnormal and disliked
i'm not smart or well educated i guess
i notice other things, emotion suppress
it make me paranoid in cause i'm wrong
but why did she twitch or stair so long

i want to be weird but in a good way
a strange hero with alot to say

So you sit home
Drinking alone
Empty bottle in your hand
Don't even try
To sort out the lies
It's worse to try to understand

yea i stole that last verse, it seems to fit
my brain doesnt work right to me that it pure wit
but i'm probly wrong i ussaly am
atleast i admit it i an't living a sham
i like telling the truth, ya know
so heres a few, lets go

i'm scared of grey aliens, my father and the dark
i'm near 21 so feel free to laugh and remark
i read colour out of space couldnt sleep of a day
i don't believe in a god, but in trouble i pray
i think i'm drepressed, but don't say cause apprently it's cool now
why do do we want to be damaged please tell me? how?

i want to be weird but in a good way
a strange hero with alot to say

i like to sleep alot
i ant lazy just in dreams, problems are forgot
but strangely i drink alot of coffee
what a strange thought, coffee?

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  1. Date: 1/28/2010 12:21:00 PM
    i get that alot, cheers

  1. Date: 1/28/2010 12:19:00 PM
    cute in a weird way, --smile--

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 6:25:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Please continue writing and sharing with us David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 3:02:00 PM
    as long as i keep having strange thoughts

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 12:36:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts put to pen in these lines. As they say there are not atheist in fox holes. Keep writing. Sara