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Backing Up

Saw it leaving as vividly near to me as my own senses were. Free of curiosity, It had become So unpossessive Of true poverty Nothing is lost To yourself, which holds all of it for a moment and lets it go, serenely without judgment.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/9/2012 3:03:00 PM
Your poetry is as pretty as the avatar smile you have. A great piece that holds the reader. Lovely. Michael
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Date: 8/13/2012 10:34:00 PM
great write Aida
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Date: 8/10/2012 12:41:00 PM
Definately something to make you stop and think. Great write.
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Date: 8/3/2012 2:09:00 AM
i love the phrase "nothing is lost to yourself' it makes me think, and this is a wonderful write. i love reading new poets that i haven't seen on poetry soup before ;) =Juli-Michelle=
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Date: 8/2/2012 1:27:00 PM
the imagery in this piece is lyrical and powerful. aida... and i love the emotion in this work . grrreat write on sweet surrender, let go!...:) huggs!
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Date: 7/31/2012 11:05:00 AM
Aida good poem...David
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Date: 7/31/2012 10:56:00 AM
Aida, a pleasure to read this poem - very good and wise - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2012 10:47:00 AM
‡ Love The Depth Here & The Final Verse * Also, If Your Treasures Do Not Mind My Saying So, You, Are Quite Beautiful * 'Backing Up,' & I Am Not A Judge But Serenity Surely I Do Now Know; Lovely ... My Luv, Rachel ‡
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