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Below is the poem entitled BACK TO ORIGIN which was written by poet Neldy Jolo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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People are commonly different
Symbol of diversity piece
Pure race doesn’t exists

Color and creed are just an identity
Believe only in human history
God sculptured them from clay

People are equally created
Having many opposites
But respecting others taste

When everyone is treated equal
Nothing appears but peace in hand
Discrimination, disunity and, suffering won’t be born anymore

Written to advocate to suppress racism
Bandar Sandakan, Sabah, Malaysia
10:30-11:00 am, November 13. 07, Tuesday

Copyright © Neldy Jolo

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  1. Date: 7/18/2009 5:42:00 PM
    What an uplifting view. Blessings to you for sharing it. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 7/17/2009 4:43:00 PM
    Love how this one promotes equality and love for all mankind... congrats on the feature

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 8:46:00 PM
    Thank you for everything to everybody here.

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 2:15:00 PM
    neldy, congrats on your feature...Raul

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 4:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Nedly. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 1:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured poetry. More power and success. Ernilando

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 10:58:00 PM
    Peace I vote for it ... congrates on your piece being featured this week wonderful ... Jayne

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 7:07:00 PM
    I see it coming... the peace you crave. Wow, Great flow of words, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 5:25:00 PM
    "When everyone is treated equal/Nothing appears but peace in hand/Discrimination, disunity and, suffering won’t be born anymore"...Powerful lines, Neldy. Very well penned. Congratualtions on being featured this week. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 11:42:00 PM
    raceism is something that will never die, but will dim, has dimmed, thanks greatly to pieces like this... Wonderful write.....JP