Back Into the Sky

The silver clouds Turn black as night In an instant Green makes its way within A churning flow Creating fear about Then the rotation of the clouds Form the greatest Tornado A giant massive form That moves slowly across the land Leaving terror And destruction all about The darkness Still moves in circles Pulling the earth within it It gets closer And closer Until right before me It dissipates Leaving me alone In front of the mess That it made The touch of wind As it broke apart and lifted The tornado flew up Back into the sky I felt it ~~Poof~~
Russell Sivey Contest: free verse. Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A 7/25/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 8/15/2013 4:00:00 PM
Hello Russell, dropping in with a smile. I hope you are well... have you in my thoughts right now.. :-) ... hugs...Linda
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Date: 8/2/2013 5:36:00 AM
Love it Russell super poem congrats on win Shadow smiles
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Date: 8/1/2013 11:15:00 PM
Russell, congratulations... ... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/31/2013 5:00:00 PM
Russell co granulation a on your fantastic win. Mother Nature's fury is a scary experience. I hope this was not your personal incident. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/30/2013 4:28:00 PM
short, simple and powerful. and the ending was bittersweet. . . congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/30/2013 2:39:00 PM
You painted a graphic detailed picture of this phenomena. I really like surprise endings. The "Poof" was excellent :) Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/30/2013 8:34:00 AM
Russell, congratulations.... luv... Linda
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Date: 7/27/2013 2:24:00 PM
love this one, Russell - and just loved the last line
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Date: 7/27/2013 11:11:00 AM
I liked this one... You might like my "Storm Devils"... It was written a while ago, tho.
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Date: 7/26/2013 3:11:00 PM
Whoa!! I hope that is just a write and not a recent experience..Reads like it could have been scary..Thanks for the visits to my work..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 7/26/2013 2:31:00 PM
remarkable work; i was easily moved by the powerful lines and imagined the whole scene happening, russel...the mocement of this piece give its ending a real whip... beautifully scribed!.;)huggs
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Date: 7/26/2013 7:46:00 AM
A misleading silver lining? Wicked! Wonderfully done!
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Date: 7/26/2013 5:17:00 AM
This was lovely to read Russell.Loved the imagery painted here.
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Date: 7/25/2013 11:09:00 PM
wow, I had no idea it was for my contest. The first two lines had me at grip. I could not stop reading the poem. Lol then I noticed it was for my content. Russell, thank you. luv...linda
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