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The sky at midnight same as any other time... the earth moves us all. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/15/2012 3:02:00 PM

Looking up makes me feel small but not in a bad way. It makes me appreciate being part of something so magnificent.

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 11/15/2012 1:16:00 PM

I get the same feeling lying on the ground looking up at the stars...my brother and I used to spend entire summer nights watching stars and feeling the universe tingle....nice share, Harry

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/13/2012 8:18:00 PM

Enjoyable hsiku! We are all stuck - for the time being - on this blue orb. Let's make the best of it with wine, woman, song - and poetry. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2012 8:06:00 PM

Hello Harry... the earth is the best mental situation around me. love the way you made me rotate along with your haiku.. xox~pd

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/25/2012 6:56:00 AM

enjoyed reading your works this day with my coffee. Harry you remind me of Galileo....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2012 9:46:00 PM

Still loving this one. Now I will go searching for a few of your oldies!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/24/2012 8:39:00 PM

We are the ones doing the moving, not the sky. Good haiku.

Linda Barr

Date: 9/24/2012 11:52:00 AM

That's candid, but true. Thank you for the review. Linda

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/24/2012 10:52:00 AM

so much meaning in such few words - nicely done :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/24/2012 1:46:00 AM

Hi there I have left you a soup mail x

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/23/2012 3:23:00 PM

tender is the way you portray the circling of the sun, harry.. eloquent' ku!..:) huggs!

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 9/23/2012 7:04:00 AM

A very poignant and beautifully crafted haiku. Thank you for sharing my friend and also thank you for dropping by my page. Hugs

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/23/2012 1:58:00 AM

Deep thought. Well said. Tfs

Richard Palmer

Date: 9/22/2012 6:18:00 PM

some in circles,some up and down,some left or right,earth moves us all,witty Harry

Jack Horne

Date: 9/22/2012 1:58:00 PM

very clever write here, Harry - love it

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2012 9:41:00 PM

Every thing the same vs. we are moving. I really like that contrast!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/21/2012 4:06:00 PM

ahhhhh a deep thinker ;) Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/21/2012 12:24:00 PM

Great work that we all can relate to and understand..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2012 11:26:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your writing with us Harry. I enjoyed reading it today. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Chidozie Uche O.

Date: 9/21/2012 10:11:00 AM

Studying it line by studying, still I noticed my brain's nut runinng farther, setting words life draft game or chess. Father still Father, youngman still youngman... Good one Harry.

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 9/21/2012 9:28:00 AM

Reads as a haiku should....suggesting so much more than the mere words say...a good haiku.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/21/2012 8:23:00 AM

It certainly does, it moves my earth anyway xx

Kash Poet

Date: 9/21/2012 7:52:00 AM

Yeah...so true harry.Very nice haiku!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/21/2012 7:38:00 AM

This is quite the factual write, a plain and truthful poem my friend! I really enjoyed this awesome and fully marvelous write Harry! What a superior poem in many ways, no denying the reality of this write! Harmonious piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/21/2012 7:28:00 AM

Yes, that's true Harry. Well written. - Have a lovely weekend. / / oxox love Anne-Lise :)