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Below is the poem entitled Awkward which was written by poet Laura Breidenthal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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He walks over,
Guess he wants to talk.
Great, he isn’t going to leave now.
It’s not that I don’t care to talk to him,
I do enjoy his company.
My mind is somewhere else,
Can’t think of anything to say!

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  1. Date: 9/14/2012 12:07:00 PM
    haha! cool poem

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 5:10:00 PM
    Dear Laura, I like How YOU start and end with the same word "Awkward" I was very shy in my youth and everything was Awkward Superb LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 11/23/2011 4:51:00 PM
    haha, I liked how you arrived to the end: Awkward!!

  1. Date: 7/4/2011 7:56:00 AM
    how cool and clever Lara.. so honestly written..we have all been there and done that at some point in our romantic lives.. awesome u wrote about it luv.. appreciate your sweet comments always welcome..happy 4th luv..

  1. Date: 7/3/2011 11:11:00 AM
    funny....story of my life.

  1. Date: 7/2/2011 6:13:00 PM
    I like this.