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Away

time is ticking -

if I listen closely

I can hear it; in the distance

a horn's mournful notes have begun to play -  

forlornness wafting to my ear cannot drown what I fear. . . 

sweet life  t r i c k l i n g . . . .  .   a  w  a  y
 
For Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem no.44 Poetry Contest

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Line Gauthier Date: 11/10/2022 3:27:00 PM charming poem and presentation, Andrea ~ Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 5/29/2022 6:12:00 AM CONGRATULATIONS on your today's win on bite size poem contest and a belated CONGRATULATIONS on a deserving trophy win in the previous contest and for this marvelous write! Many hugs to you on your win my dear friend Andrea! Thanks a lot for sharing. I love your poem a lot. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/27/2022 9:43:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write about time. Always ticking away and cannot stop it. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................... Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 5/26/2022 9:13:00 PM "t r i c k l i n g . . . . . a w a y" - Beautifully written. Congratulations! Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 4/2/2020 10:06:00 AM Deeply moving. This is wonderful. Stay well. Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 9/14/2018 6:15:00 PM WELL DONE, My Friend! Beautiful, haunting lines. My computer has been down for almost a week now - I will do my best to catch up tonight. SO GLAD it came back up. Truly a great write. Love ... CayCay Login to Reply

Carole Duet Date: 9/13/2018 3:19:00 PM Just great, Andrea. This poem definitely has a "mood". Love it and congrats on your win. Carole Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 9/11/2018 3:08:00 AM Great win with wonderful Rictameter, Andrea. Congrats. Login to Reply

Jesse Rowe Date: 9/10/2018 7:20:00 PM This is absolutely stunning. And if I may add, also works when reading it in reverse. :) Congratulations on your wonderful #1 placement! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 9/10/2018 7:16:00 PM Congrats on your win Andrea Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/10/2018 3:42:00 PM Wow Andrea, Congratulations on your deserving trophy win! : ) Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 9/10/2018 3:06:00 PM Congrats on your gold medal win, Andrea. Well penned. Login to Reply

Curtis Moorman Date: 9/10/2018 2:05:00 PM This, I could easily have predicted. 'Nuff said! Login to Reply

White Wolf Date: 9/10/2018 1:28:00 PM Congrats and happy birthday, Andrea! Budgie Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/10/2018 2:58:00 PM wow, what a great surprise. Thanks so much!

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/2/2013 9:32:00 PM I'm not familiar with this style. You have such a diverse poetic talent. Well done. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 9/19/2013 9:28:00 AM I must try this form. Remember that I told you I would have my house paid for it I reached 105. So, I will do it because I've shut down all the clocks. There will be no ticking away for this kid. Love, daver Login to Reply Daver Austin Date: 9/19/2013 9:30:00 AM And by the way - this is one helluva good poem. More love, daver

Richard D Seal Date: 9/14/2013 8:23:00 PM Congratulations Petal, nine meaningful lines, talking of time it's 3.21 a.m here, I must be mad reading your poems at this time night or is it morning lol. Goodnight and take care, Richard Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/13/2013 10:11:00 AM a nice winning poem ..... always love LINDA Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 9/12/2013 10:32:00 AM As we lament of times we spent living the life we're given. Remember to stay in the present for that's where we are livin'. :) Login to Reply

John Posey Date: 9/12/2013 9:41:00 AM great writing, as usual. makes me think I'd be better off just claiming your rejects.... Girl, you really know what pen and ink are for..... Jake Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/12/2013 8:13:00 AM awesome Andrea..... congrats ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 9/11/2013 8:55:00 PM Great write, Andrea! I really like how you spaced the letters at the end for emphasis. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Danesh Morgan Date: 9/11/2013 8:23:00 PM Congrats on your win. Morgan Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/11/2013 6:13:00 AM andie... a languid sway of artwords.. congrats on your win and thank you for checking my blog.. :) huggs Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/11/2013 2:17:00 AM Congrat on such a beauty ..Well deserved win : ) Do you remember when i entered your contest about three yrs ago?Im entering another at lasy..Trying to remove the phobia i have for competitions : )..after 3yr..lol Login to Reply

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