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Away

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Away

Away,
I finally figured out
how could i be so stupid
so hurtfull
so disrespectful
Away,
I see how badly I hurt you
how dumb I made you feel
the lies
the tears i caused
I'm sorry
Away,
was not a vacation
Not paradise
Because while i was
Away,
I noticed how bad i made you suffer
I'm sorry
I suffer just thing of how bad i treated you
and I deserve every bit of the suffering.
Away, 
I say I'm sorry
I know many believe I'm not
but in my heart and mind
I am!
Away!

Deticated to: My mom

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  1. Date: 6/21/2009 9:04:00 PM
    Nice description of family relations here. You eventually overcame your guilt. We all know situations like this. Nice write! Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 4:20:00 AM
    wow you actually feel the emotion in this one

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 7:02:00 PM
    Reminds me of something id say to my friend Jacob. Nicely penned.