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Awakening

Morning shifts the stars with rays and the sun a clear sky kissed, track of the night with dewy drops the day as a wizard erased. And in prayer my heart strops before the celebration of nature-word may God keep me in the moment at least, splits when life is like a flower bloomed... And when every speck and wight this music of awakening loves so our destingy gives us and lift freigth insight and pure thougth attracts, Now with one hope thirsted I'm ready to give wings to my dreams, vow to myself being alwyes traveled and spirit of excitement to remise...

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Date: 1/21/2011 6:30:00 PM
I'm ready to give wings to my dreams, This line of your in your poem is quite catchy, Georgieva. I am sorry Georgieva, I don't send written document of recognition to the winners in my contests. Your honor is in the fact that other poets see your name here on soup. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/8/2010 6:02:00 AM
Thank you !:) Gospojica Nataliq Georgieva
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Date: 12/7/2010 7:47:00 PM
I'm not sure you clearly made your point with your choice of words.
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Date: 12/7/2010 4:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nataliq. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 4:47:00 AM
Very creative write full of deeper meanings on the awakening, Nataliq
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