Awakening

Morning shifts the stars with rays
    and the sun a clear sky kissed,
    track  of the night with dewy drops
    the day as a wizard erased.
    And in prayer my heart strops
    before the celebration of nature-word
    may God keep me in the moment at least,
    splits when life is like a flower bloomed...


   
    And when every speck and wight
    this music of awakening loves
    so our destingy gives us and lift freigth
    insight and pure thougth attracts,
    Now with one hope thirsted
    I'm ready to give wings to my dreams,
    vow to myself being alwyes traveled
    and spirit  of excitement to remise...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 1/21/2011 6:30:00 PM
I'm ready to give wings to my dreams, This line of your in your poem is quite catchy, Georgieva. I am sorry Georgieva, I don't send written document of recognition to the winners in my contests. Your honor is in the fact that other poets see your name here on soup. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/8/2010 6:02:00 AM
Thank you !:) Gospojica Nataliq Georgieva
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Date: 12/7/2010 7:47:00 PM
I'm not sure you clearly made your point with your choice of words.
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Date: 12/7/2010 4:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nataliq. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 4:47:00 AM
Very creative write full of deeper meanings on the awakening, Nataliq
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