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Awaiting Dawn

The heat of today, Shall vanish, as the day ends; Coolness shall return. · Coolness shall return, On shoulders of tomorrow: While night exhales dawn. · While night exhales dawn, Breath on invisible wings; Discharges fresh air. · Discharges fresh air, The lungs of the forest breathes; Scorching regions praise. · Scorching regions praise, The arrival of coolness, Their faith awaits dawn.

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  1. Date: 7/21/2009 11:39:00 AM
    This poem captures just what I have been feeling as the heat of the day gives way to a welcome evening coolness! I always enjoy reading and experiencing your poems. Krista

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 11:12:00 AM
    A new favourite of mine Loved it ... Jayne x

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 4:21:00 PM
    Absolutely- Kudos, Poet!! poet butterfly

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 8:22:00 AM
    Quite beautiful Raul.One to re-read in my favourites Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 3:30:00 AM
    your friend Ruben here below left me breathless:) and so did this poem---heat of the day-coolness to follow,night exhales dawn,their faith awaits dawn-their beautiful dawn--your writes are magic-you aren't just a master of Haikus ,you 're the king of all----charma

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 9:30:00 PM
    "Breath on invisible wings;/Discharges fresh air."... "Breath on invisible wings;/Discharges fresh air."..."Breath on invisible wings;/Discharges fresh air."..."Breath on invisible wings;/Discharges fresh air."... I can't stop, my friend... Sublime, magical, unique...

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 9:20:00 PM
    truly beautiful, Raul, jim

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 8:32:00 PM
    I love this one. It's going to my favs. You have painted a Beautiful picture. Keep up the wonderful writing. Lots of Love, Misty

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 4:28:00 PM
    Breathtaking and beautiful, and just what I needed today. It is scorching here...and did remind me that the coolness shall return! Lovely lovely, choka!!

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 2:45:00 PM
    Very nice choka, Raul. You have a gift for painting images of naure.

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 2:05:00 PM
    Raul, where did you find the inspiration behind this classic write, Wow - you have asceneded higher in my eyes now. Your poems are always presented with dressage, uniformity and the pristine look of a soldier on parade>>James