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This is a thank you to all those whom have read and commented to what I've written.
These comments give me hope that one day I will be able to publish my book of poetry. Thank you to all my readers. CHERYL ANNA DUNN
Far beyond mans intrusions, A vast hidden world lives on. An ancient fortress lost amidst, Historical reference, a faded shade, Amongst remembrances memory. Imagination limitless vision, Separating conscious truth, And make believers legendary Spree. Conjuring mystical thoughts, Simply, Drifting aloft, Revealing a forgotten golden age. Let castaways adventurers fly away Into magics paradise, As sunshine's rays, flicker amidst Mid summers softening light. Illuminating forgotten stone gardens, Secret courtyards in splendors array. Rose covered vines, weaving down Walled trellises evergreen. Ruined towers jetting upward, Blanketed by thickened mosses Torrents. Crystal clear water streams, forth Through cupid fountains. Nesting song birds, sing loves, Harmonious music. Wooing hearts at winged flight. Glide without tethers strings, Rejoicing carefree, Within natures solitude. Reclining, beside a shaded, Willow tree I'm resting, Completely to mine ease. Watching clouds placing, Ideally, By as dusken stars. Pass beneath nights, Blackening sky’s. Knowing at last the beauty, That is Avalon. BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/12/2015 1:18:00 AM
Cherl, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/10/2015 8:58:00 AM
Hi Cheri: As always, I was stunned by your pithy words describing Avalon. My most sincere compliments and an italian hug.
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Date: 6/10/2015 7:02:00 AM
Lovely, rich in imagery, Cherl, worthy of a 7. squared then cubed. Viv x
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Date: 10/18/2014 2:08:00 AM
truly very beautifully crafted piece cherl always a pleasure to read dear friend excellent pen
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Date: 1/21/2014 9:50:00 PM
Avalon, the beauty of the deep... legendary island, love the imagery of the carefree rejoicing heart... Thank you for the awesome taste of drunken stars... Linda
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:08:00 PM
Love the imagery. This poem reminds me of the song "May It Be" by Enya
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Date: 11/3/2013 9:01:00 PM
Hello Cherl, I haven't seen you around,... Hope you are well....I'm here in hopes you noticed a new short poem called... PASS the LIGHT HOUSE..... stop by when you have time... as for me I noticed a new one on the top...hugs... LINDA
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Date: 6/8/2013 3:43:00 PM
of beauty your write is, enjoyed your write,. Linda
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Date: 5/2/2013 4:30:00 PM
I have that movie,, awesome write. was watching "first Night", Sean Connery, Richard Gere ;} your poems have a nice quality ;}
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Date: 4/22/2013 10:59:00 PM
A very victorious and confident poem, I like it a lot.
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