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Autumn's Song and Dance

A cold wind rattles my window Under blankets I snuggle warm The beautiful flowers sadly will bloom no more Until the cold weather has gone Merry still the birds that sing and dance Now the trees lay down their emerald gowns Silent flocks of birds fly away Summer delight is over On the ground the brittle leaves all lay Nothing is green for it has turned to gold Glittering, swirling, twirling in an Autumn dance Around the fireplace at night we gather Nights long with the sighing wind Down the sun early Dance the tumbling, trembling leaves And the forest is crimson and golden Naughty bandit squirrels steal things strange Come dance the forest path with me Everything is beautiful and changing magically __________________________ August 27, 2012 Poetry/Acrostic/Autumn's Song and Dance Copyright Protected, ID 08-416-524-27 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Autumn Acrostic Sponsor, Francine Roberts, Judged 09/15/2012 Seventh Place

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Date: 9/20/2012 1:13:00 PM
Love this! Kind of a melancholy feel, but beautiful just the same. :) Tanya
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Date: 9/20/2012 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Francine's "Autumn Acrostic" contest Constance. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2012 2:29:00 PM
Wonderful images in this, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/16/2012 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful description of nature in the fall, Constance. So sweetly composed!!! Congratulations, dear.
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Date: 9/16/2012 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations Constance on another beautiful entry and your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/16/2012 12:49:00 AM
CONGRATS CONSTANCE ON A GORGEOUS WRITE AND EXCITING WIN FOR AN AUTUMN ACROSTIC LUV ..
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Date: 9/15/2012 11:30:00 PM
Constance, , a wonderful congratulations with your wonderful win in Francine Roberts " Autumn Acrostic " love the breeze and image ~ always* PD
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Date: 9/15/2012 10:55:00 PM
many congrats Constance on your 7th place win in the contest
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Date: 8/28/2012 12:45:00 PM
love this beautiful write, my friend. I hope you will feel much better soon - I'm sure the kitties are enjoying having you around so much. I always remember you in my prayers too - get well soon x
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Date: 8/28/2012 9:05:00 AM
an eloquent Acrostic depicting the lovely Season of Autumn Constance.. good luck dear heart in contest .. am always in awe of your writing splendor luv
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Date: 8/27/2012 9:12:00 PM
A beautiful walk down a forest path, Constance. I like the little naughty squirrels added in. Hope you are feeling better and better these days.
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Date: 8/27/2012 4:42:00 PM
This is a perfect display of a wondrous Autumn day! You have scattered many fragments of what a wonderful Fall day comprises of and put them all together in one beautiful poem! What a delightful piece here my friend! Great Work!!
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