Get Your Premium Membership

Autumn's Blush

It's October now; the air seems somewhat cooler than my thoughts, yet, I can feel the warmth in the breeze as it kisses the trees. They're turning slightly red as I did, and am now, in remembering when our lips first met. It won't be long now till they undress; all good things fall naked beneath covers of white. Soon they'll reach out in anticipation and feel the first few flakes of innocence covering them deep within layers of thought. They'll be less red then, and more at ease in their nakedness as they breathe deeper. The wind's changing pitch again, it's rising high in the hills, falling low through the valley below. I can feel it shifting with my thoughts as I pull back the layers of my own mind. It's no longer cool, this air, but rather warm as it mingles your scent with memory, this day. It's October, yet, I wonder, will I too fall naked and less red before autumn's passing? The wind is calm right now, it's pausing, but it's still October and the trees are still slightly red although I, I am more autumn-like than they, in my remembering.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/23/2017 3:44:00 AM
Sandra, you made me blush...nice one darling
Login to Reply
Date: 1/19/2017 8:14:00 PM
A very lovely poem...This I truly enjoyed! My best regards, Sandra - Cheers! :) john
Login to Reply
Date: 1/19/2017 6:41:00 AM
Very nice, Sandra! Your thought, memories, changes flow with the seasons on the simple beauty of their revealing colors.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2017 12:00:00 PM
I could feel the texture of your piece as I read through it..... Beautiful work, Sandra!! ;-) Congrats for having it featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/18/2013 7:22:00 PM
This poem is very illustrative and full of imagery in each line you read. Great work.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/15/2012 2:49:00 PM
this is really nice free verse. I think this is your forte! Loved the personification in this one.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/15/2012 6:02:00 AM
Well written my dear Sandra! You paint a colourful picture of this most beautiful time of the year! Welcome to the Soup... hugs, Jack
Login to Reply
Date: 10/14/2012 8:22:00 PM
Sandra, I love October, but down here in Texas, you will not see this image... Especially no red in them leaves.. love your poem ..xox~pd
Login to Reply
Date: 10/14/2012 8:14:00 PM
Awesome beauty, Sandy. A sketch of the poets mind. Loving this a lot. One love Joy Wells
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs