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Autumn's Breath

As I walk through this colorful boulevard, cool breeze touches the back of my neck from the breath of autumn, breath of life from the nostrils of hope; I smile at my lady who looks graciously captivating like the red and pink maples and apples on my left; this cozy feeling sends me into a trance..... Trees branches spread the rays of the yellow sun, like the beam of a strong musical concert,Illuminating the stage. The displays of yellow,green and red foliage turn the road and pathway into a superb international fashion show; on the floor lies leaves of different colors forming a crispy soft carpet on the ground, `Oh! it reminds me of my wedding day`, atmosphere full of heavenly bliss,... I jerk back to the present as zephyr touches me gently and whistles softly into my ears; The birds flap their wings to give the almighty a clap offering for this beautiful Cre..a..t.ion, my lady looks at my face and nods happily, squeezing my right hand reassuringly, Kismet has blessed us with autumn,once again!.

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Date: 9/14/2013 9:10:00 AM
Olusegun, congrats!!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Scenery.... hugs *LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2013 6:17:00 AM
hi O.A love your take on autumn congrats on fine win
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Date: 9/12/2013 8:16:00 AM
a beautiful theme, a beautiful win ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/11/2013 8:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/11/2013 5:55:00 PM
beautifully written, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/11/2013 1:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work this afternoon..Uniquely creative..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/10/2013 6:31:00 PM
This is beautiful.....congratulations
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Date: 9/10/2013 12:28:00 PM
- Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Olusegun. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/23/2013 2:10:00 PM
How can this not take the breath away...with such beauty??
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