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Autumn Ramblings






Bounty of the year
Soft color that warms the heart
Time for reflection
The grape ripe for picking now
Hearts prepare for winter's song

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2012 11:26:00 AM

Congrats on your great win..I knew that it was a winner..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2012 3:29:00 PM

this is beautiful, Barbara. Congrats in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2012 3:25:00 PM

Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 6:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2012 3:14:00 AM

CONGRATS BG ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS ELEGANT WRITE LUV ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 6:52:00 PM

BARBARA, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD

Goran Rahim

Date: 10/7/2012 8:59:00 PM

nice one, I guess we see autumn at different point of view :) great read.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2012 4:07:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your autumn and harvest work..It is getting that time of year..Soon winter will be on us..Thanks for stopping by..I apprecitate your taking time to comment...Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/7/2012 3:34:00 PM

This is a lovely picture of autumn, BG... Annalise

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/7/2012 2:53:00 PM

This is a very beautiful write my friend!! I really enjoyed this tremendously pieced together poem! What a delightful and remarkable write this is! This is a heartwarming and tender piece, Great Work!!