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Autumn Cusp

Late November dawn. Sun’s rays slanting low Filtering through a haze of naked trees To stream, in weakened state, through my window Caressing my face, as the darkness flees The colour of the light, warming my walls, Banishes thought of winter’s cold fingers And, though, daily, the temperature falls, So much of autumn’s beauty still lingers Red leafed vines paint the near terraced skyline Green woodpeckers laugh with unshared reason Persimmon, holly, mistletoe and pine Nature’s decorations for this season… (And Christmas does not feel so far away) Replete with hope; new birth, new life, new day ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/20/2008 5:18:00 PM
This write sings ... beautiful rhythm and I love the "terraced skyline" ... we're having a blustery, rainy day with skies that quickly go from black to gray and back again. We're so fortunate to have an "inside" ... smile ... too many homeless folks and why they come to mind is just my trip ... meanwhile back to the holly and mistletoe ... smile ... so glad you're here at The Soup!!
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Date: 11/20/2008 4:01:00 PM
Another beautiful write Sir Nigel. You have scored with this one. You have an amazing talent to paint beautiful pictures that draws the reader in. Wonderful write.
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Date: 11/20/2008 12:30:00 PM
A really beautiful gentle and visual write here nigel, love the last 2 :) Love Kristin
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Date: 11/20/2008 11:54:00 AM
What a seasonal beauty is this poem! It is simply lovely, Nigel! Peaceful and hopeful. :) ~Carrie
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Date: 11/20/2008 11:25:00 AM
such a vivid picture you painted with this beautiful piece of poetry.
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Date: 11/20/2008 10:35:00 AM
Nigel, this is just so beautiful. Your well chosen words, rhyme, and appreciation of the season, is just magnificent. Such an amazing gift you have. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/20/2008 10:28:00 AM
Very nice Nigel. Great landscape and uplifting conclusion.
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Date: 11/20/2008 9:52:00 AM
This is simply lovely! Love the autumnal into winter imagery here, even bringing in the holidays. Great easy flow and just a perfect write. Michael
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