Autumn Colors

The glistening yellow sun shines down upon the golden brown fields harvested today.
Our gardens are cleared of the red, green, yellow vegetables and our canning is underway.
As we look across the orchard the pickers are on the last of the apples to be picked and sold.
The rustic color of the leaves are beginning to furl and we remember that fall has been born again.
As the sun sets it looks as if a fire was set to the orange, yellow, brown, red and green leaves.
A light breeze sets in and we hear a rustle as the leaves drop lazily upon the once green grass, as we drift off to sleep.

Written for: Russell Sivey's "Autumn, Fall Colors Contest"
Written on: 08/16/2012 By: Carol Brown
2nd Place Winner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 2/4/2021 8:58:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Lovely to find your poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology~
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Date: 1/30/2014 6:41:00 AM
what a lovely poem :))..great imagery:))
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:30:00 PM
Another beautiful poem... love the lightness...pd
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Date: 11/9/2012 2:40:00 PM
Enchanting poem Carol. Makes me think of the 'good ole' days' when leife was simple and nature filled our senses with her beauty
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Date: 10/1/2012 2:10:00 AM
I love the colours. And sunshine is always there. God bless your gift. Love, Hanitra
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Date: 9/28/2012 8:39:00 PM
Beautiful season put into poetic form.
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Date: 9/11/2012 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your finish in the contest. This poem serves as a good introduction to the glamorous season of fall. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/30/2012 5:35:00 AM
Thank you all for your kind comments and congratulations on this piece. They are always greatly appreciated. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2012 1:37:00 PM
awesome poem .............. all the bees will stars fight for seat of every word of this poem for honey.
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:45:00 PM
Carol, congrats on your win with this wonderful, descriptive write! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/26/2012 8:26:00 AM
congrats Carol on a glorious win for a lovely vivid adventure into Autumn colors .. thankxx for your thoughts and prayers too .. hope to bounce back asap
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Date: 8/25/2012 7:31:00 AM
congrats on your win Carol
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Date: 8/25/2012 3:45:00 AM
Wonderful descriptive write,Carol...Congratulations on your win..Great job....
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Date: 8/22/2012 5:11:00 AM
I am canning right now preparing for the winter.. It isn't so bad. I liked your poem.. have a great day!!
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Date: 8/21/2012 2:43:00 PM
Really good one! You must be so smart to do canning!, maybe break the lines a bit different hon? [after down line 1, at red, line 3, tree line 5..see?] xxoo Light & Love
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Date: 8/21/2012 12:19:00 PM
I THINK I ALREADY POST COMMENT ON THIS ONE BUT AGAIN i WAS COMPELLD TO READ AGAIN THANKYOU FOR YOUR KIND WORDS CAROL XX DAVID SCOTT AND I LOVE YOUR PICTURE
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Date: 8/21/2012 7:16:00 AM
love this Carol, good luck in contest.
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Date: 8/20/2012 4:10:00 PM
Carol--All this beauty described AND just 40 miles away!! Wish you could post a pic of this colorful scene! I can smell the apples on the trees and see the illuminous foliage too! Enjoyed! gwendolen
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Date: 8/19/2012 9:59:00 PM
Lovely, Carol. I'm sure Russell will love this! You really caught the colours. Sigh. I just managed to get a poem ready for your raindrops contest and I must have missed it. Double checking, is it possible to enter it or too late? Thanks, Cyndi
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Date: 8/19/2012 12:00:00 PM
This poem reminds me of something I wrote years ago, but your poem is alot better. "Darkened by my path of Auturn apples"
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Date: 8/19/2012 8:35:00 AM
beautiful write, Carol. Hope your weekend is a good one : )
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Date: 8/19/2012 1:57:00 AM
splash of hues fill up this beautiful pagem carol.. lovely!... winning huggs!.:)
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Date: 8/18/2012 8:33:00 PM
This indeed a colorful scene- the colors of life. All the best in the contest Carol.
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Date: 8/18/2012 6:17:00 PM
good luck in russell's contest and thank you for your comments
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Date: 8/18/2012 12:41:00 PM
Lovely verse! Cynthia
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