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autumn 1st attempt at Haiku

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autumn 1st attempt at Haiku

  what my eyes behold
autumn trees giving color
    winter right behind

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  1. Date: 4/17/2011 10:00:00 PM
    loved it ...

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 7:57:00 AM
    I love the attempt nature gives here.. Oo. unless u mean your first attempt at haiku.. well either way I can see it from both sides... the side winter making an attempt.. for autumn.. enjoyed

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 11:57:00 PM
    Oh boy, this is good. Harry

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 10:03:00 PM
    Very good for first time. Keep it up!

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 1:53:00 PM
    Nice transition of the seasons you have captured well, Robert