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'augmented Senses'

his saccharine moves
my senses are augmented...
floating on air

passionsenryu

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/30/2011 7:21:00 AM

Great Senryu, Wilma! Geniet die lees vandag middag. Daar is 'n baie sunhine comeing deur my vensters en insiggewend my artefakte van Papoea-Nieu-Guinee en Vanuatu .. Have a nice week wat voorlê ... Gert:!)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2011 12:09:00 AM

Beware of those "saccharine moves," Wilma. You know what they say about sweet-talking guys. Really like this senryu! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/28/2011 1:36:00 PM

Full of feelings an love.. well put together my dear from across the swimming pond.. hope your week was a good one.. cold n snow here in NY my dear....with love Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/28/2011 7:07:00 AM

Stopping by to say hello and let you I enjoyed reading your poetry today Wilma. I am in the process of packing up to move in a couple weeks so not much time for one on one. I will be stopping by when I can. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love and blessings, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2011 8:25:00 PM

Cool senryu, Wilma! Very different sounding. And hey, I talk to my cats all the time (for all the good it does me. haha) Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/27/2011 6:54:00 PM

Sensual and desireable write, Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/27/2011 2:15:00 PM

Just got our power back on from the nasty Nor Easter snowstorm and 20 inches and counting my friend... where is Summer and heat???

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/27/2011 2:14:00 PM

Ah Wilma your words delight us all and such special flavor u provide every time..my friend.. just posted my new Senryu too.. enjoy with luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2011 12:44:00 PM

deep Wilma, and full of love and strong desired needs.. Women and our senses.. we need to filll the claim we build around our thoughts... have yourself a nice one,..p.d.

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