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Audacious Antics

adjourn the circus for you have a child, who is confounded between antics and love. her umbrella have been beaten by the cold, she wants to be hold and touched, forever-fold. adjourn the circus for you have a child, your audacious face-paint won’t last another smile. ludicrous like the monkey who belongs in the wild, take you last applause to find; they all did it to unwind. adjourn the circus for you have a child, your heart seem to tick out of chance as you glister the ludicrous dance, she begs you, to alter your stance. a drop of pearl escapes, and travels over the ghoulish landscape of fractured love and tainted frappe, to find a telescope in search for hope. but once again she is only to find; your soul still colorblind. audacious antic, adjourn the circus for you have a child.

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Date: 1/20/2016 9:31:00 PM
petrus, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 9/17/2010 10:10:00 AM
I really really love it, I think perhaps it would be even better with a change of verb tense in line 3 "her umbrella has been beaten" line 4 "she wants to be held" and since you include such end rhyme in the 3rd verse I'd label it VERSE not free verse..all in all though it's a great write! Light & Love
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