Attic

rabies ridden bats batting about my belfry blind inspiration

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2013 9:57:00 PM

Love that alliteration, tim. Congrats for your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/29/2013 5:32:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Tim

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/26/2013 5:29:00 PM

Excellent play on words. I really enjoyed reading. Also, thanks for your review on my work-i appreciate it. Always, Laura

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/25/2013 10:08:00 AM

So blind is the bat.. Blind inspiration leads to the most excitimg worlds and forbidden places..Interestimg senryu..By the way tnks for your lovely comment and your footle.You put a smile on my face..Cherry syrup and caramel are my favs.Re my surname i get all kind of interpretations..hehe : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2013 3:32:00 PM

how cool. Blind inspiration. I love how you made that connection, Tim.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/24/2013 11:35:00 AM

- Where did the idea come from .... well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2013 8:41:00 PM

Hello Tim, blind as a bat, thoughts are going through my mind...... LOL. i don't know... I got to say... stay out of the attic. a great senryu. love..LINDA

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/23/2013 8:27:00 PM

And so I to feel your words! Laura :0)