Atlanta

My son is nine years old;
    we laugh, read, cry, paint, 
        draw, watch cartoons, fish, 
           play at the park, and do homework

I love having a son: 

After eight years of trying we still 
     have not conceived. When my dream of having a
         baby girl has come true, her name will be......

                           Atlanta Lopez-


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Inspired by " fabulous fantasy"

hosted by -christie Moses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/14/2009 12:48:00 PM
What a beautiful name she will have Abe, i have a daughter called Rebekah - she's my princess - even at 18 >> i hope to read poems about Atalanta Lopez in the near future>>James
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Date: 7/2/2009 1:53:00 PM
It's called "manifesting" and we all can do it if we believe! Light, Love & Luck!
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Date: 5/29/2009 10:36:00 AM
awesome, hope is so near don't let go. Thank you for your comment.
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Date: 4/28/2009 11:46:00 AM
this is sweet and truly heartfelt and i sincerely wish you luck and blessings on having your daughter very soon. thank you abe for your comment. i appreciate it. RAIN.........
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Date: 4/18/2009 5:05:00 PM
Aw, what a beautiful dream. Hoping it comes true Abe. Our children are our most precious gifts. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/10/2009 10:28:00 PM
Abe, ( in one of our dialects, Abe, means friend). A touching poem. I love reading your poems. Good luck and God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 4/9/2009 12:45:00 PM
Perfectly beautiful tribute to fatherhood and hopes for the future. What a wonderful write you've done here, Abe. I look forward to reading more from you and Good Luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/5/2009 8:02:00 AM
Atlanta Lopez, what a beautiful name, I truly hope one day, she is born... and what a lovely fantasy poem... constance
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Date: 4/4/2009 12:41:00 PM
Very touching , my dear !
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:47:00 PM
Keep trying, I hope it comes true.
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:38:00 AM
This poem is deep, I hope your fantasy comes true. DN
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Date: 4/2/2009 6:54:00 AM
OMG.....I love this poem and that name Atlanta is hard core congrats and I wish the best to you...Love Tina
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Date: 4/1/2009 6:00:00 PM
Beautifl name and nice poem Abe............Danielle
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:53:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem, Abe. It is a beautiful, heartfelt piece and I pray that your dreams are realized soon! Good luck in Christies contest! Thank you for your kind thoughts! Love, Robn
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:31:00 PM
My God grant the wish you express so eloquently in this poem, Abe! Love the name you chose for the baby girl, and I wish you well in Christie's contest!
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:39:00 AM
Brother this is some write....I hope this won't be a fantasy much longer...touched my heart..best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 4/1/2009 12:51:00 AM
Bestb wishes with this one Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my Yellowstone series
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Date: 3/31/2009 8:57:00 PM
Hoping this will come true. Im sure youve heard many of these stories..but we were doing adoption papers when we concieved. Save this to read to her when she gets here! BG
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Date: 3/31/2009 8:55:00 PM
I love the way you approached this. Lovely, but hopeful write. I'm sure God has your best interest at heart. Tyler
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:56:00 PM
Oh gosh how amazingly, beautifully sweet. Such a purity of hope and desire. It took me a few years to conceive so I understand somewhat your longing. May God bless you with a quiver full.
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:18:00 PM
Oh my...this is such a tender, heartfelt write! What a wonderful, wonderful fantasy! It melts my heart. A touching poem, Abe...best wishes. Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:11:00 PM
Wow, this is a great heart felt poem, The name is a great name to share. I'll keep you in my prayers...Raul
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