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At The Shady Inn

Thus we came and went
in the quaking dawn.
Puppets on a string
caught up in this game.
Reckon we will burn.

Bind my soul then.
My hands are soiled
dirty work done.
Yet it feels right.

I love you 
sounds so trite
in this doom.

Back door.
Shade's drawn 
at noon.


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  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:30:00 PM
    I love the form you have used to tell this story...It is a perfect fit....SuZ

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 4:50:00 AM
    Tremendous, this is a wonderful write my friend! I truly loved reading this remarkable poem this morning! You have written a magnificent and enlightening piece, quite the powerful poem here, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 11:01:00 PM
    That seems like the perfect poem a a night campfire gathering. Thanks for the read.