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At One At Last

above mountains I soar like an eagle, taking note of the grandeur below over the sea reflections gleam on ripples mirror images of heaven peace and joy fill my soul arched rainbow seems to climb straight to heaven there in the blue, I feel one with the universe let me show you the way to the clouds atop my wings, you’ll sense the delight seeing Earth’s beauty spinning below splendor of eternal life paints the sky above

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/4/2013 12:26:00 PM
I feel the peace and serenity in your poem, Seafaress...this is beautiful and makes one appreciate love and faith even more. Take care! Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/23/2012 8:23:00 PM
Im rereading this gem.How are you dear?merry xmas...you are deeply missed.
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Date: 12/9/2012 3:39:00 PM
the touch of an angel in these wonderful words. and a sight worth while to see above. hope your day is well, Carolyn. lovely write. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/7/2012 8:59:00 PM
Ahh Carolyn...I am soaring over the mountains and sea right there with you...wishing you a happy and peaceful Christmas...may the healing hand of God lift you up to higher ground...please come back soon...you are sorely missed - Tim
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Date: 11/26/2012 4:36:00 AM
No people here to spoil the scene; all is peaceful and unspoiled. Makes for a nice place to be. Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 10/30/2012 3:32:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, just dropped in, to say hello... love this wonderful poem, hope you are ok.. hope you are not in that bad weather we are hearing about here in the uk....
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Date: 9/20/2012 8:27:00 PM
Wow, here is one I had not seen. It's really nice, CArolyn. Great theme you chose to portray "at one at last!!"
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Date: 9/20/2012 8:27:00 PM
email me sometime how you are doing.
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Date: 8/28/2012 10:30:00 AM
Excellent imagination ended beautifully with the superb last line. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/2/2012 4:21:00 AM
Beautiful. My Aunt Teenie, who passed in her sleep yesterday, must certainly see the splendor of eternal life. She was a wonderful, sweet spirited person. This poem takes me there...
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Date: 7/17/2012 5:21:00 AM
Missing your writes, Carolyn! This one is a beauty, you have always shown us "the way to the clouds" with your writes and comments.:) I hope all's going well with you. Best wishes! Love, Mikki
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Date: 7/9/2012 11:06:00 AM
Awesome piece here, my friend - very glad to see it was a winner
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:51:00 PM
How beautiful this is.. thanks for the journey atop those flying wings... Lovely.Hope you are fine my good friend...Charma
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "#186" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2012 6:29:00 PM
This beautiful poem leaves me somewhat sad..Congratulations on the win..sending my prayers and best wishes on your way..! Jag
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Date: 7/1/2012 2:46:00 PM
Well done on your win here Carolyn; I am wishing you well from the bottom of my heart always a pleasure to read your words..)
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Date: 7/1/2012 10:37:00 AM
congrats Carolyn on a wonderful write and first placwe win for Brian.. another awesome selection of woreds to captivate our eyes .. hope u r feeling a bit better.. many prayers are being sent your way and uplifted for u luv..
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Date: 6/30/2012 10:10:00 AM
A very vivid, colorful realization. Love, daver
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Date: 6/29/2012 11:28:00 PM
Simply beautiful...every line is uplifting! I hope your feeling better. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:49:00 PM
You have painted an extremely beautiful write my friend! I just love the descriptions you told as I envisioned every part of your illustrious poem! The scenes you have given are perfect in every way, I felt peace with each line Carolyn! I just hope you felt that peace too! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:19:00 PM
Love it !!! BEAUTIFUL....BEAUTIFUL... - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:20:00 PM
Can not find words Carolyn.
Date: 6/29/2012 1:04:00 PM
Just Beautiful Carolyn.Love it!!!
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Date: 6/29/2012 12:58:00 PM
Carolyn yep I'll go with you..David
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Date: 6/29/2012 12:56:00 PM
You flow and fly like a dove Carolyn. Peace and blessing. Much love for you.
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